Hi Laki, I like how you explained your writing and that it makes sense, I would agree with you on having a dog because you can play with them all the time.
Hi Laki, Your introduction to your writing is great, I like how you begun your writing with a question. I also like how you explained the reasons why you want a dog. The structure of your writing is good but if you proofread you could fix up the small mistakes amongst your piece of writing.
Hi Laki,
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained your writing and that it makes sense, I would agree with you on having a dog because you can play with them all the time.
Great Work
Jerome
Hi Laki,
ReplyDeleteYour introduction to your writing is great, I like how you begun your writing with a question. I also like how you explained the reasons why you want a dog. The structure of your writing is good but if you proofread you could fix up the small mistakes amongst your piece of writing.
Mikaela
Hey Laki,
ReplyDeleteI like how you put reasons on why you want the animal.Your introduction is amazing to your writing. Keep up the great work.
Hi Laki,
ReplyDeleteI like your Reasons and why you want a animal.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!