Quick Write

Learning Goal - I can write a recount with the correct structure, with paragraphs and using descriptive language.

I can write a recount using my personal voice.

The Power went off

It was a rainy day we were all doing Prototec when Mr Coakley came and told Mrs Middleton that their turning off the power so they can fix it.So Mrs Middleton told us to turn off our netbooks,so we did and we put it into our desks.

So then we played a maths game. we had to guess a number it was only between 10,000’s and 1’s.So first my group had to take a guess but we could  only say a digit Etuale said “eight in the thousands column ,” but he was wrong and so the the rest of the groups had a turn.As we were playing Mrs Middleton stopped because we weren’t playing it right we had to say a number we said 82464 but we were wrong.So the other groups took a guess and Magic Monarchs got it right but I forgot the number.So then the bell rang and we all went and ate then played some board games.

Then they fixed the power and the internet came on so some people went on free time on their netbooks.I stayed on playing with board games I couldn’t make anything because the bell rang so we had to do some learning.

Holiday Recount

Learning Goal - We are learning to write a recount with a Title, clear introduction, middle and conclusion.

We are learning to write a recount using our personal voice.

My first time on a Ferry boat

3/8/2017

In the holidays I was so excited because my family and I was going to visit my uncle in Town,he was living on a Ferry boat because he is going to drive it to Tonga with some other Tongan people.Before we went we got some food,we got Mcdonalds,KFC and takeaway.As soon as we got on the boat we ate.When we were eating Wela and I ate some then went around the boat.

As soon as we were finish eating we explored the boat except for my mum and dad,my mum went on her phone and my dad ate some takeaway.So we went down to the entrance then inside a room and explored it we saw big bags and some Life jackets.

After that we got bored so we played hide and seek Wela had to count while Moala,Christopher and I hid.But he didn’t come so we went back but I stayed  and hid so they tried to find me it took them one minute to find me.

After that we went into the room where they drive the boat and took a photo of the controls.Then we came out and took a photo but we saw my dad and a Tongan man leaving so we went down to the entrance and said bye.After that we just took photo’s of boats and did funny faces.Then we were bored so we went and started looking around places we haven’t been.After that we went back to my mum and just sat down but then we all of a sudden we got scared because the boat started moving a lot.Then we saw my dad coming,as soon as he came he went to the room where you drive the boat I saw him sitting in one seat so I went and sat in the other seat.Then we both got out and we all went home.That was one of the best days for me,it was really fun.

Tennis Recount

Playing a new tennis game

Learning Goal-We are learning to follow a structure of a recount.

I can give my recount writing a Title that tells the reader what the story will be about

I can write an introduction with a good hook.

I can write the middle with different paragraphs

I can write a conclusion with a personal comment

I can leave a space between the introduction, the middle paragraphs and the conclusion

On Tuesday we had Tennis and I was so excited because we were going to play a new tennis game in the courts.We needed teams so Mrs Middleton came with Sateki and Opeti to our group so Sateki,Opeti,Christopher,Alfred and I were a team.When they came we were super excited to play.Opeti and I were on one side and Alfred and Christopher was on the other side and Sateki was out waiting for someone to be out.

So I started off with a serve and when I served it it was too short and hit the net so I was out and Sateki comes in and he has to serve because who ever comes in serves.Sateki serves it,it goes over the net and goes to Alfred and Alfred hits it too hard and goes over their heads.So I go in and replace Alfred.So we start playing again but then Coach Campbell calls us to listen to him because some people weren’t doing it right.So then he says “now let’s see who can do a rally over 5.

So then we start,I serve it and Opeti hits it back and goes to Christopher and Christopher hits it but it went out and then Coach Campbell comes and says “have you guys got up to 5” but we said no.So he says “oh it’s alright let me see you guys play.”So we played,Opeti serves it to Alfred,Alfred hits it but goes to Coach Campbell so he hit’s it to Opeti and Opeti hit’s it to Christopher then he hit’s it to me and I hit it to Christopher then try’s to hit it to us but goes to Coach Campbell so he hits it to Opeti and he hit’s it to Alfred and Alfred hit’s too hard and goes over our heads.“YAY WE GOT NINE”we all shout,“Yeah that’s just because I helped you guys.”So then we play and again but without coach and we did the same thing but got 8 and then it was time to go.