Narrative Writing

2.08.2019
I am learning to write a narrative story and include a simile,metaphor and a personification.

Bob is all alone at the beach sitting on a low brick wall, the wind blows on his
ears and rain falls on his tender face. He grabs hold of his short hair,  “I don’t
know what to do” he says firmly.  His family is all gone now, he doesn’t have a
wife or any kids,

The ocean growls as the big waves hit the shore. People walk pass and they don’t even care one bit, he has no job and no friends. He turns around and falls back in the water and suddenly someone grabs his leg and tells him “its okay, you don’t need to do that. Please come with me!” He takes him home, gives him a blanket and a hot chocolate. “Thank you”Bob says, “Why were you out there” the man asks “Well, I have no family, they all moved away and now I just got fired from my job, I don’t know what to do”Bob says “well, you can stay here if you want”the man says “Wow, thank you so much,” Bob says.

Narrative Writing

Learn - I am learning to write a story with a Simile and a Metaphor
Yellow - Metaphor
Blue - Simile
It was a Sunny Day in the woods, Mother had told her daughter Ivy to go and
give some bread to her Grandmother,Ivy’s Grandmother has the heart of a loving
person . Ivy was a nice little girl, she always wore a blue hood,blue shoes and
she 2 beautiful blue eyes. 

On her journey she ran into a Wolf as big as a tall building,The wolf had
sharp teeth and great big ears,”Hello”she said “Hello, where are you going”
the wolf had said, “To my Grandmother’s house straight ahead”she said
“Wow, look at those beautiful flowers maybe you should get some for
your Grandmother” the wolf said “yeah thank you”she said, then the wolf
ran to Ivy’ grandmother’s house. 

Once Ivy got to her grandmother’s house she was hiding and the Wolf was
in bed, “Hey, Grandma”Ivy said “woah,what have you got here”the wolf said
“I brought you some bread” “Why thank you dear”the wolf said
“wait a minute,you don’t have great big teeth and big fluffy ears”Ivy said
“aahhhhhhh”Ivy screams, then a Lumberjack comes and kills the wolf.

Narrative writing.

Narrative writing

On Saturday my mum,dad,two brothers,grandmother,sister and we went to the pool in GI.

First my dad,two brothers and walked to the pool and my mum and grandmother went on the van because they wanted to.So my dad two brothers,sister and I got there and they still won’t there so we went for a swim.

After we went for a swim they got there so we got out of the pool to go to them and then when we got to them they had a gun and they shot me because I got there first .

They thought I was dead  but I was really closing my eyes because it hurt badly.There was a lot of blood on me .Son my brother tried to punch my mum but she saw it coming so she ducked down and then shot my brother and then he pretended to die just like I was to.

So my dad and sister surrendered then my mum took of the mask and it was an ugly dude with a cricket mouth then my brother and I pulled his legs and he fell on the ground then my dad kicked his big head.

Then we got a long knife and then we went to the beach and used it as a surfboard and we use the long knife to hold on it.

I know how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.