Reading diary

Narrative writing.

Narrative writing

On Saturday my mum,dad,two brothers,grandmother,sister and we went to the pool in GI.

First my dad,two brothers and walked to the pool and my mum and grandmother went on the van because they wanted to.So my dad two brothers,sister and I got there and they still won’t there so we went for a swim.

After we went for a swim they got there so we got out of the pool to go to them and then when we got to them they had a gun and they shot me because I got there first .

They thought I was dead  but I was really closing my eyes because it hurt badly.There was a lot of blood on me .Son my brother tried to punch my mum but she saw it coming so she ducked down and then shot my brother and then he pretended to die just like I was to.

So my dad and sister surrendered then my mum took of the mask and it was an ugly dude with a cricket mouth then my brother and I pulled his legs and he fell on the ground then my dad kicked his big head.

Then we got a long knife and then we went to the beach and used it as a surfboard and we use the long knife to hold on it.

I know how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

Basic facts.

Today I got 59/60 on sheet.But it's all right because this is the highest score with out getting 60/60.

Today I got 37/60 on timed.But it's all right because I will practise my basic facts.

typing

Today I got 98 (20) on my typing practise.So next I will focus on my work and try to get a higher score.

basic facts

On Monday I got 40/60 on timed  and today I got 36/60 so next time I do timed I will focus on my work and try to get a higher score.

Saint Patrick's feast and mass

18/3/16

On saint patricks day Saint Pius School gathered up in the church.

When we got in the church we to use holy water then we go in and sit down.Then Patrick read his part when he was reading he said stand up and face your soul friend then he would say something and after he says it we have to say I will then after he says that father speaks and then I had to go up with my soul friend and we have to say our  part but when I was going up to say my part I was so nervous.Then I just said my part so I not afraid anymore.After our class room 5 and room 3 had a shared lunch under a big tree .But my best part was the shared lunch .Because we got to eat food.

We are learning to write a recount using our personal voice.I used my personal voice in my writing when I decided?I read my part in the mass on saint patrick's day

typing

Today my progress is 109 (22).But it's all right because I am getting faster then before at typing so next I will try to get a higher score.

Basic facts

Today I got 26/60 on sheet.But it's all right because in the weekends I am going to practise my basic facts so next time I do prototec I will try harder.

Today I got 46/60 on timed/But it's all right because I am going to practise my basic facts in ten seconds so next time I do prototec I will try to get a higher score.