Narrative writing.

Narrative writing

On Saturday my mum,dad,two brothers,grandmother,sister and we went to the pool in GI.

First my dad,two brothers and walked to the pool and my mum and grandmother went on the van because they wanted to.So my dad two brothers,sister and I got there and they still won’t there so we went for a swim.

After we went for a swim they got there so we got out of the pool to go to them and then when we got to them they had a gun and they shot me because I got there first .

They thought I was dead  but I was really closing my eyes because it hurt badly.There was a lot of blood on me .Son my brother tried to punch my mum but she saw it coming so she ducked down and then shot my brother and then he pretended to die just like I was to.

So my dad and sister surrendered then my mum took of the mask and it was an ugly dude with a cricket mouth then my brother and I pulled his legs and he fell on the ground then my dad kicked his big head.

Then we got a long knife and then we went to the beach and used it as a surfboard and we use the long knife to hold on it.

I know how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.

I learned how to write a narrative that has a problem and a solution.