Mothers day poem.

Learning Goal-

 We are learning to use similes and metaphors to make our writing more interesting.

10/5/2017 - Mother’s Day Poem - Laki Mum is as beautiful as a star shining down from the night sky. Mum is a gorgeous sunset shining over the sea. My mum is like glue because she is right there when I need her. My mum is a pillow comforting me. My mum is a model wearing different kind of beautiful dresses. Thank you mum for buying me food. Thank you for helping me do my home learning. Thank you for taking me to the shops or Mcdonalds when I have money. Thank you for taking me to school everyday. Thank you mum for buying me a PS4. I used the simile "My mum is like glue because she is right there when I need her." and the metaphor "My mum is a pillow comforting me." which shows I have achieved my learning goal.

WHAT AM I?

Learning Goal-
We are learning to use our senses to help us describe nouns.

9/5/2017 WHAT AM I?

I am a circle.I am flat as a pancake.I am bumpy like a rocky road. I am light brown and kind of gold. You can see little small oats. I am a 2D shape.

I am hard like a rock and I am rough. On my back it is smooth like holding water.

I smell like coconut and oats. I taste like coconuts and oats. I taste delicious..I am crunchy.

                                                                  

I am an Anzac Biscuit.

My Basic Facts Test

Learning Goal-

I am testing how quickly I can remember my Basic Facts.

I need to remember my Basic Facts because they are the knowledge I need to help me with strategies to solve Maths problems.

Friday

Monday

On Monday I got 34/40. I got the Addition to 20,Subtraction to 20 and Division and Multiplication 2 3 5 10 facts wrong.On Friday I got 39/40 I got 1 wrong on the Subtraction to 20 block.So in the weekends I will practise my Subtraction to 20 facts.

My Typing Test

Learning Goal-

I am practising my typing so I can be quicker and more accurate.

This will help me finish my work

Friday

Monday

On Monday my WPM result was 55 and today it is 55. I have been practising but I got the same score.So I have not been concentrating enough.So next time I will try and concentrate more.

What is my number

Learning Goal-I am practising my number knowledge.
Succes Criteria-
I can show my number in many different ways.
I can show how to use my numbers in many different ways.

My Basic Facts Test

Learning Goal-I am testing how quickly I can remember my Basic Facts.

I need to remember my Basic Facts because they are the knowledge I need to help me with strategies to solve Maths problems.

On Monday I got 39/40 I got the Subtraction to 20 facts wrong.Today I got 35/40 I got the Addition to 20,Subtraction to 20 and 2 3 5 10 division and multiplication wrong because I was not focusing.So next time I will try and focus more.

My Typing Test

Learning Goal-I am practising my typing so I can be quicker and more accurate.

This will help me finish my work faster.

On Monday my WPM result was 52 and today it is 59.

I have been practicing so my result is higher and I can type quicker.

Tennis Recount

Playing a new tennis game

Learning Goal-We are learning to follow a structure of a recount.

I can give my recount writing a Title that tells the reader what the story will be about

I can write an introduction with a good hook.

I can write the middle with different paragraphs

I can write a conclusion with a personal comment

I can leave a space between the introduction, the middle paragraphs and the conclusion

On Tuesday we had Tennis and I was so excited because we were going to play a new tennis game in the courts.We needed teams so Mrs Middleton came with Sateki and Opeti to our group so Sateki,Opeti,Christopher,Alfred and I were a team.When they came we were super excited to play.Opeti and I were on one side and Alfred and Christopher was on the other side and Sateki was out waiting for someone to be out.

So I started off with a serve and when I served it it was too short and hit the net so I was out and Sateki comes in and he has to serve because who ever comes in serves.Sateki serves it,it goes over the net and goes to Alfred and Alfred hits it too hard and goes over their heads.So I go in and replace Alfred.So we start playing again but then Coach Campbell calls us to listen to him because some people weren’t doing it right.So then he says “now let’s see who can do a rally over 5.

So then we start,I serve it and Opeti hits it back and goes to Christopher and Christopher hits it but it went out and then Coach Campbell comes and says “have you guys got up to 5” but we said no.So he says “oh it’s alright let me see you guys play.”So we played,Opeti serves it to Alfred,Alfred hits it but goes to Coach Campbell so he hit’s it to Opeti and Opeti hit’s it to Christopher then he hit’s it to me and I hit it to Christopher then try’s to hit it to us but goes to Coach Campbell so he hits it to Opeti and he hit’s it to Alfred and Alfred hit’s too hard and goes over our heads.“YAY WE GOT NINE”we all shout,“Yeah that’s just because I helped you guys.”So then we play and again but without coach and we did the same thing but got 8 and then it was time to go.

My Basic Facts

Learning Goal:I am practising my basic facts so I can instantly remember my basic facts knowledge.

Last Friday I got 37/40 for Stage 6.Today I got 37/40 on stage 6.Last Friday,The knowledge I got wrong was Addition to 20,Subtraction to 20,×÷ 2 3 5 10.

My Typing Test

Learning Goal:I am practising my typing so I can be quicker and more accurate.This will help me finish my work faster. 

On Monday my score was (57) WPM and today it is (52) WPM.Monday's score was higher than today's  because I was not concentrating enough.Next time I will concentrate more.