Hi Laki. It's Lukas. Great Work! Great to see you blogging Laki. Your poem is so good. I like how you put the moon for the background of your writing because it just feels like your in space! Keep up the great work!
Hi Laki, Its me Christopher. Great to see your upto date! Also the kind of poem you chose is great. I remember last year everytime we did poems I would always do haikus.
But I think you could've put more effort into this because if you fall off the moon you will be floating because there is no gravity. Also what was making you laugh?
Besides that I think your doing great! Also if you want more points you could comment on other peoples post! Have a great holiday!
You did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love the way you created a Haiku! Very creative! :)
I really liked the colour and image you used to present your poem. Ka pai!
I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Neil Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.
If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!
Hi Laki.
ReplyDeleteIt's Lukas.
Great Work!
Great to see you blogging Laki. Your poem is so good. I like how you put the moon for the background of your writing because it just feels like your in space!
Keep up the great work!
Kind Regards
Lukas
Hey Lukas,
DeleteIts great to see you blogging aswell. Thank you for leaving a positive comment!
Good Luck for the rest of your blogging!
Laki
Hi Laki,
ReplyDeleteIts me Christopher.
Great to see your upto date!
Also the kind of poem you chose is great.
I remember last year everytime we did poems I would always do haikus.
But I think you could've put more effort into this because
if you fall off the moon you will be floating because there is no gravity.
Also what was making you laugh?
Besides that I think your doing great! Also if you want more points you could comment on other peoples post! Have a great holiday!
Malo Aupito
Christopher
Kia ora Laki,
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love the way you created a Haiku! Very creative! :)
I really liked the colour and image you used to present your poem. Ka pai!
I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Neil Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.
If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!
Noho ora mai
Erica