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Monday, 7 January 2019

Summer Learning Journey Week 4 Day 1 Activity 3

Activity 3: The Sky in Shanghai


On your blog, write a poem that describes your feelings about travelling to Beijing, China.

Haiku

Humongous buildings,
Terrible Air Pollution,
Fascinating Food.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Laki,

    Happy, happy new year to you!

    This haiku is amazing!

    Haiku are one of my favourite types of poetry because you seem to be able to say so much with so few words. I am teaching poetry in term one this year to an intermediate class! Any tips?

    You haiku gives a great sense of Beijing. Sure the air pollution isn't ideal but there's amazing food. And tall buildings which some like and some don't. Great balance! Is it a place you'd like to go?

    Talk to you soon and keep up the great writing!
    - Lee

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  2. Hi Laki,
    Great job on finishing this activity. Your haiku about the Beijing in China is really good. It's sad that humans create so much air pollution because all we are doing is hurting ourselves and other people. How would you reduce air pollution?

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  3. Hi Laki,
    I like your haiku because it sounds clear that you are talking about Beijing, it's sad to see that air pollution is in a great country like Beijing where they might have cool and fun activity's.

    Great work and keep it up
    Jerome

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